3-5 Continued

After receiving my review from another student I agree that I should add some more quotes into that paper to help the reader understand the feeling in the comic. I also agree that I need to add more detail about the man and the child. Giving more detail about this character will show my readers the manner in which this father is portrayed. I also like the pages included within my review this helps me to see what images my readers are in visioning while reading my paper. Or also what images might pop into a readers head that has never read the comic.