To start my paper on Kalman's essay my purpose is to get people to think about how they are going about their life. Also to get my readers to understand the thoughts of Kalman and help them to imagine the images that she used within her essay. By giving examples of the images that were shown as well as using quotes help the reader to imagine. My audience for this papers is geared towards everyone. I want to get the younger people interested in the thought of eating healthier as well as get the adults motivated to be healthier and slow their lifestyle down to increase the satisfaction to their lifestyle.
Writing a paper on Neufeld's comic I was hoping to show the changes in people. The changes include: changes in personality, social status, as well as the changes that take place within themselves. I show these changes in the paper with the example of the way the "thugs" changed there demeanor. They were thought to be rough and unsympathetic, however after hurricane Katrina they were shown as helping and caring to all who was effected. Also they were scarifying themselves to do what was best for the group. The raided a store but not to benefit themselves but to pass out the goods to the group. My audience for this essay would have to be for everyone excluding younger readers for the language used.
In writing about the Junod article my purpose of my essay is to show that different thoughts and views of those effected by September 11th. I am hoping to show that the people show their emotions in different ways. As am artist would make a masterpiece and also as a photographer would express though images. Where as others express how they are feeling with anger and denial. An example used in my paper was the way the Hernandez family felt about the actual falling man. They thought he was a disgrace to all who had died on that horrible morning. My audience for this geared towards adults also for some language content as well as some ideas that may be hard to understand by an immature young adult.
For the Kalman essay my purpose was also to get people to think about their lifestyle. I also used a lot of the images from the text to enhance my purpose.
ReplyDeleteSounds like you are on the right track. As I analyzed each writer I took a look at each of their interpretations and used that to decide how I was going to write my essays. What I mean is every writer has to interpret through their writing so they had to do what we were learning to do. So I was looking at how they were doing it which gave me more insight as to how I should do it. Sometimes doing this took a little more time, especially with Junod's article because their was just so much to sift through. I really hope your final drafts turn out great.
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